Sometimes someone will be angry and publish something they didn't mean, or was wrong. I'm retracting the poem: Burning Bridges.
Here's the original:
All on my own,
One by one
You burn my bridges
Cutting me off,
Trapping me here
One,
Burning, burning
Two,
Blazing, Blazing
Three,
Breaking, breaking
Four,
Bridges burning, burning,
All gone up in smoke
You’ve burnt the last bridge,
Gone, gone
Gone up in flames
I’m on my own,
You’ve burnt your chances.
So say your goodbyes,
As our last bridge burns.
I won’t be coming back.
Here's the new and improved version
All on my own,
One by one,
I've burnt my bridges,
My hate
and anger
And childish stupidity
Lighting the flames,
and burning the ropes,
cutting me off,
trapping me here,
One,
Burning, burning
Two,
Blazing, Blazing
Three,
Breaking, Breaking,
Four,
Bridges burning, burning
All gone up in smoke
I've burnt the last bridge
Gone, gone
Gone up in flames,
I'm on my own
I've left myself alone,
So I'm saying my goodbyes
And I'm saying I'm sorry,
As the last bridges burns,
I can't come back
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